weekly blog post

This week I began the process of putting my paper together. I ran into difficulties initially when i first started writing the paper, but i was assisted tremendously by my outline. Having a outline out in front of me really helped me stay focused on what i was trying to write about and kept me from drifting of topic. i feel like i still need to do more research to strengthen my argument. The peer review in class was helpful as well. The people that reviewed my paper gave me good opinions on what they think i should expand. So with their advise I'm going to review my sources and see if i can come up with some more convincing details the support my solutions.